For my proposal I will be writing and editorial to a newspaper, I'm not
sure if I should stay local, or submit it to like a nationally covered
newspaper. My argument’s primary audience would be parents and school board
members, that may seem limited but they are ultimately the ones who could
actually enforce the change I’m proposing. My solution, proposal, is simple.
Schools should hold mini workouts during recesses. One local school in Tempe,
AZ does 7 minute little work outs with the whole school on Friday mornings,
which I am adapting to the idea of holding mini work outs DURING recess for
several minutes and then continuing with recess. I think because students don’t
always run around during recess, making fun little workout activities for kids
to be active during the day would be very beneficial for their lifestyles.
Because it could be integrated into the already allotted times for recess, it
wouldn’t be altering the schools days at all. It would just be a means of
creating fun games or exercises intended on making kids get active. Some
parents who may be opposed to it could argue that its taking away the child’s
choice to participate in recess, because recess is the time for them to not
have to follow teachers order, (like and adult on break during work) but if the
games are creative and fun and engaging, then it wouldn’t be forcing a child to
participate; plus after the workout, which can be anywhere from 7-10 minutes,
the kids can just continue with recess. Others may argue that Physical
Education is the same thing as what I’m proposing, whoever its not. Physical
education is typically a class that students do once a week, whereas my
proposal would be everyday for several minutes DURING recess, then children can
continue on with recess after the several minutes of activity. I’ve outlined my
intended audience, how I propose change, as well as some opposing statements
that could be said about my proposal. This is how I intend on writing my editorial.
Wow I never would have thougt of this idea! Good job! So your intended audience would primarily be parents. If the children's parents are on board, then they will convince the schools of the benefits of your programs. In your newspaper proposal you would have to have ethos so that people will take your ideas seriously. I think just basic facts about childhood obesity and the concrete benefits that your regimine could have on children would be sufficient. You've already stated why your ideas apply to the logic or logos of the benefit of children. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! I hope this picks up and goes around! I would like to see it's success and impact. I think if you tried to submit local and national, both would be good :-) And if it gets published local then revise and make another to publish nationally?
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