Throughout my paper I want my audience to draw several
conclusions about kids meals. My main argument will be that kids meals are a
leading cause in childhood obesity because they draw kids into eating fast food
at a young age. Along the way, there will be other conclusions that they should
reach. My target audience will be parents so I will be targeting their pathos,
and emotional ties to their children in order to show claim how fast food is
targeting children at younger ages in order to keep them consumers as they grow
up. I will show the history of fast food
chains and kids meals, then I will show how they continue to promote their own
sales and food by having extremely timely toys, meaning the toys that the have in
their kids meals have to do with whatever is going on in the world of children
(usually movies or TV shows that change weekly). The challenge that I may face
with my argument and statement is that fast food companies are now offering
healthier options for their kid’s meals, but to refute that however my claim
will be that those healthier options are usually an additional cost. To provide
evidence for this I will find several kids meals options at several fast food
chains and see what their kids meals contain and if they offer healthier
options, whether or not they are an additional cost. I think these will be the
major enthymemes that will arise from my argument; there may be more however
that come up as I continue writing my paper.
I feel that if you end up bringing up this idea that healthier options are offered you end up making it sound like the issue has been taken care of, when in fact it is just the beginning, because healthy options aren't the cheapest, and kids still crave the less healthy options. I think your argument definitely fits your audience, good job.
ReplyDeleteI think you have kinda a good start but you need to get a lot more information and background on the topic. You saying that if we just got healthier food would stop the issue but that not going to completely stop everything that would just make some stuff easier, but its not going to solve the problem. Even if you give the kids a chance to eat food they still don't have to eat it they can still choose to eat the bad food and they crappy food.
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